4 parts need to editing or proofreading
1. page 2: Executive Summary
I would suggest to incluide briefly the aim(s) of the project, methodology used, key findings, emerging conclusions, and recommendations.
2. page 4: Introduction
You should introduce the project, the methodology, and how you collected the data about this company.
3. page 20: Conclusion
You should be more specific about your strategic recommendations for the company. If possible, include suggestions about potential challenges and barriers when implementing such recommendations.
4. page 20: Learning Insights
Each member of the group, individually, have to explain what they have learned when preparing this project.
You should inlcude some learning about leadership and strategic management theories and concepts, your learning about applying these theories and concepts into practice, providing recommendations for strategic change, working in a group, time management, preparing a business report, and impact of this project on your career plans (if any). Each member of the team should write about her/his learning separately from this project.
(we only have two members, so pls add one more)
