Two of your sources look great: Whitwell (2012) and Frings (2014). Unfortunately, you need to replace the Perry (2006) source since it is older than 2011. I am glad you seem comfortable with using the databases to find your sources about FTD. I used the database’s “cite” button to get these APA style references because the capitalization on your journal titles was incorrect, and the doi numbers were missing: Whitwell, J. L., & Josephs, K. A. (2012). Recent advances in the imaging of frontotemporal dementia. Current Neurology and Neuroscience Reports, 12(6), 715-23. https://dx.doi.org/10.1007/s11910-012-0317-0 Frings, L., Yew, B., Flanagan, E., Lam, B. Y. K., Hüll, M., Huppertz, H.-J., Hodges, J. R., & Hornberger, M. (2014). Longitudinal grey and white matter changes in frontotemporal dementia and Alzheimer’s disease. PLoS ONE, 9(3), 1–8. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0090814 Your annotations Your annotations contain the two parts you need – a summary and a discussion of why the source is credible – but I have some concerns. First, read through the whole article and then summarize it in your own words. The summaries you provide are highly technical as though written by a scientist or experienced PhD researcher, but your summary should break down what the article is about in your own language (which may include scientific and technical terms from the article, but interpreted in your own words) in 3-4 sentences that convey the heart of what is covered in the article. Be careful to avoid plagiarism in your final copy to Prof. Magjuka. Your whole annotated bibliography should be 700-900 words, so get to the heart of the matter as you summarize what the article is about, and what it proves or tells you about FTD. Second, you address credibility but only briefly. Your annotations would benefit from a deeper look at why your sources are good sources. When you address credibility of your source, consider if the author is an expert, and how you can tell. Is there an author note that tells you where they work, what their title is, or what higher education degrees they hold? Is the source a magazine or web site with a good reputation for fact-checking? Is it from a peer-reviewed journal? Does the article quote other experts, or end with a list of references to back up its claims? For APA style: · – The page title centered at the top should be Frontotemporal Dementia: Annotated Bibliography. It should not be in bold type, and you do not need a title page. · -The references should be listed in alphabetical order: Frings, Whitwell · -The references need a hanging indent, meaning every line after the first line of each reference should be indented. See the example under “assignments” in eLearning. See also for help. The references should not be in bold type. The hanging indent visually sets them off from what comes before and after. · -All lines of the annotations should be indented a half inch to line up with the hanging indent, not just the first line. See the example under “assignments” in eLearning. · -The whole page should have uniformly double-spaced lines, both within and between references and annotations. To help with your formatting, the hanging indent ruler should look like this: The annotation indent ruler should look like this: Please send me another draft of your annotated bibliography, so I can re-check your APA style, your annotations, and the source you find to replace Perry.
