Discuss about the Assessment of Risks and Benefits Involved in the Use of Taxol.
” I have reviewed this draft, but many of the issues I raised in my response given on March 7 have not been addressed. You are still using language that is not acceptable in academic writing and this needs to be addressed. Academic writing should be neutral in tone. You are also still not presenting an actual analysis, and it is unacceptable to simply reproduce other authors work related to your topic. A capstone requires that you do original work, which means an actual analysis of data related to your topic. You have not done this and are only reproducing what other authors have said. You will need to do an actual analysis, present original findings, and then discuss those findings. You will also need to keep deadlines in mind. I must receive a final document no later than two weeks before the last day of classes as per the syllabus and instructions given.”