A complete Master thesis will have around 70-80 pages including something like 20 tables and 20 figures and 50-80 citations minimum (only a rough orientation).
So you will see my comments and continuing questions pointing out the lack of quality work.
Your text is much too narrative and general.
You also do not citate correctly (see the pdf I have sent you).
Your reference list is also not complete when you citate the journals.
You have to step over to scientific writing, describing material flows, technologies like the chosen composting methodology technically, cost calculations if possible, so be much more precise and leave out any general statements which tell us nothing. Keep closely to you pilot area of Kumasi you refer to.
Did you calculate the volume of waste per capita? No – basic approach needed to start your material flow calculation from here.
What residual waste % and value % does this waste per capita have? Did you use statistical data of your town? of Ghana? I did not see any numbers…
Attention: your work does not need narratives and superficial comments, but figures on waste generation, the type of technology used (collection, treatment, sorting, landfilling and the disposal sites currently used.
You have to integrate tables and figures with an overview on the existing flows and propose the option of future optimized future flows.
If you collect three fractions, like you mentioned, how are they sorted and, above all, what happens to the residual waste?
If possible you should include information, if people pay for the service of waste transport. You should also declare if you only refer to municipal waste.
So you have to improve in the following points and organize a complete new chapter structure in relation to the following points and use it for your new outline (chapter structure):
1. revise your complete outline into an arc of tension with the following chapters (basic chapter waste management in Ghana->Kumasi->your model region)
2. analyze the ACTUAL situation of the current waste management (quantitative data, quantity of all waste flows flows, existing waste collection systems, containers used, existing separate collection containers and/or material flows collected via private waste collectors.
3. derivation of a future disposal concept taking into account the optimization of waste avoidance and the expansion of material recycling
4. propose the integration of waste pickers an finance of new jobs in the sector) (manual sorting?)
5. deduce an education concept.
6. discuss the finance options (by waste or landfill taxes? Others? And steps to transform towards a new optimized system
7. summary and outlook
