LaTerra,
With some revision, this submission will put you on good footing for the coming argument. 1) Saying one is better in this case is probably not even an argument. Organic food is demonstrably better. Phrase the thesis as a “should—because” statement. “Consumers should choose organic food over other selections b/c (1, 2, 3)” which previews your evidence. 2) Give the detailed outline much more detail (and don’t say you’re going to write or do anything. Actually write it). 3) Create a respectful counter that says the opposite of your position. 4) Conclude by restating the clear thesis/position statement.
I look forward to your revision.
Chris
