Organize the argument and make clear connections between the main idea of the paragraph and the evidence presented. What does the information mean to the argument, and how does it connect to the topic of the paragraph? To the thesis? You must use peer-reviewed evidence, and you need to cite it. The librarians can help you find appropriate resources, and the writing center can help you proofread and structure your thoughts more effectively and put your ideas into a more persuasive format.
