Hi, So one of your collegues already worked on this paper but after receiving feedback some things need to be changed. I will upload the paper and than if you could revise it and add the additional 5 pages that would be great! 1. The space has to be 1.5 2. The first paragraph has to be removed… 3. It has to be supported with general arguments.. so more like a literature review of social cohesion and social capital.. has to be about what they are.. multiple things that it has an effect on and that have effect on social cohesion and social capital so not JUST immigration…. more about diversity in general.. E.G. write about all the factors that influence social cohesion & social capital; what factors lead to bettering & what can be done –> so a more general focus with an overview of multiple thigns that are related to social cohesion and capit
