My instructor denied fist outline, he want me talk about my self. I choose my story where I grew up not finding water i have a little bit of my details;
Formal Outline
Title:
Topic:
Specific purpose statement:
Thesis statement:
Introduction paragraph:
Conclusion paragraph:
Reference:
Water supply in my home land
Has a unique experience shaped your view of sustainability?
Yes, I did have a problem not finding water to drink. To satisfy my thirst
I realized how important it is to have clean water to drink, to cook with, and to keep you healthy. So that really impacted me when I was a little girl. Thinking of the future of my hometown, find water to maintain a healthy life.
Do you enjoy an activity or hobby related to sustainability that is meaningful?
Yes, I do have a unique experience by carrying a big bucket of water on my head
from nearby. About two blocks.
My goal was to help my hometown, to get quick access to water by creating a water pump, inside the area where I live
Working Main Point:
1-sub point: getting access to clean water supply.
2- Sub point a quick access to water when needed.
My source is my experience where I grew up in my hometown, Africa Sudan.
:Orally citing is According to:https://www.unicef.org/sudan/water-sanitation-hygiene
Only a third of the households have access to proper sanitation while about 68 percent of households have access to improved drinking water sources.
Working Bibliography :
Water. (n.d.) In Merriam-Webster’s collegiate dictionary. Retrieved October 20,2021, from
http://WWW.merriam-webster,com/ dictionary/water
Merriam-Webster. (n.d.). Water. In Merriam-Webster.com dictionary. Retrieved October 20, 2021, from https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/water
The two ways to end the impact were: making three water pumps close by inside the area.
The city canceled the step up by adding a water line to the house.
My title: Water supply in my hometown.
Specific purpose: reaching clean healthy water to drink.
Thesis Statement: where I grew up it was very hard to find water at home. To be used. Only way was to walk two blocks to carry it with my head in a big bucket. After a long time of struggle. We were able to get access by adding three more pump water lines. Finally the city Myers added water lines to homes.
https://www.unicef.org/sudan/water-sanitation-hygiene
